Aww, this was really cute! Kind of like an adult Giving Tree
, which was clearly an inspiration. A funny story of two kooky characters who are just right for each other.My only gripe is that when the two finally have sex, the author had an attack of SeanMichaelitis. It started with this:
"They couldn't get enough.
Just not enough."
Followed, a few paragraphs down, by this:
"Aaron screaming for more.
Jake claiming him in a growling, scratchy voice.
And one paragraph later:
Which yanked me out of the steamy sex because you can't stay in the steamy sex moment and roll your eyes at the same time. Luckily, it was only in a few spots.
Clever, fast-paced, and fun. I read it all in one sitting, and enjoyed it a lot.